FMA Fanfiction

FMAFreak13 · Joined: 30 Apr 2008 Posts: 17

Well,I felt like making a random FMA fanfiction,so here it is.I'm actually a pretty new fan to FMA,and I don't know the details of the story and all that,so I can handle some contructive critisism,or corrections,or any of that.But,I'm begging you here,PLEASE don't say any mean comments or insults.If you don't have something nice to say,don't say anything!

Hi,my name is Melody.I would tell you my last name,but I honestly don't even know what is is...

My family in Ishbal have been extremely nice to me all my life,taking care of me and treating me like a real family.But even though they never said anything to me about my past,I can tell just by the many differences in our appearence-my light brown hair instead of their dark brown,my bright green eyes instead of their red ones,and my light skin compared to theirs-I knew this family wasn't my real one.

Ever since I noticed how different I was from everyone,and I mean everyone,in Ishbal,the thought of my real family has haunted me.So one day,I decided to talk about this to the woman who I've been calling Mom for years.My guess was right.

Mom told me everything as soon as I asked.She said that when I was only 10 years old,my parents were murdered.The criminal got away as soon as he arrived,so nobody even knew who did it...all they knew was that he was a man dressed all in black,and had a mask on his face.After that,I was left to fend for myself for a year,with no ways of fighting...I've never used a weapon in my life,and I never learned alchemy.After a year,the family who I live with now found me,and brought me to their village.After that,though,something hit me on the head,and I lost all memory of what really happened.

"....so you see,Melody,after you lost your memory,we figured we would keep the whole thing a secret from you.I didn't want all of this to happen...you finding out what really happened,so you could live a pure,happy life.I guess our plan didn't work too well,did it?"

I barely heard her last few words.I was too bust trying to put everything together.Then,suddenly,everything came back.The memory that I had lost when I was hit on the head was all coming back to me...The feeling of grief and agony when my parents died,the pain of having to protect myself,and getting hurt so many times without even defending myself...I remembered it all.I couldn't believe I never knew about that for four whole years!

Before I even thought about it,I stood up,ran to my room and started packing a bag.I knew what I had to do,and I knew who I had to find.

"Melody! Melody,what are you doing?" I figured Mom would know what I was doing,but I guess I had to tell her the hard way.

"Mom,I have to do this.I have to find the creep who killed my parents,and break every bone in his body.Then,I'll kill him!" I couldn't even recognize my own voice anymore,because I would never talk about killing someone....at least until now.

I swung my bag over my shoulder,hilted my sword on my belt,and left without another word.I knew finding this guy would be a big challenge...I don't even know what he looks like,and what if he's not wearing the same black clothes and mask as he was five years ago? I knew this would be a challenge,but I won't be able to live with myself until he's dead.

End of Chapter 1